10-10-2014, 06:51 PM
while it's a pleasant quote,
it needs more, the 2nd line feels a bit cliche as well. you can always post these type of poems in the for fun forum where others may join in with you happy thoughts
it needs more, the 2nd line feels a bit cliche as well. you can always post these type of poems in the for fun forum where others may join in with you happy thoughts
(10-05-2014, 02:17 AM)Cyferz Wrote: Rainy mornings, rising sun
Seize the day while it is young
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A quick post as tribute to the pig pen gods.
I've been meaning to critique more poetry here, but as I've entered senior year, time becomes scarce.
- Please do not ban me, I will be back
