Eyes

[Brownlie]

my friend always told me that eyes are so important
that soft eyes make you feel warm and safe but
the solid eyes will engulf you in the heat of love and
your eyes were so blue and so safe that
I was convinced that your heart was on fire for mine but
then I realized that your heart was cold and solid
just like your deceiving eyes
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Lol so I just registered on this site because I like writing and I don't really want to like tell anyone that I know or show them my writing but I do want feedback on it to know if its good or not or if if makes anyone feel anything.. so yeah i just kinda want feedback

So much for the study of physiognomy.