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10-10-2014, 06:05 AM

I too really liked this. Your use of language is fantastic. However, sometimes it seems to have a rhythm and sometimes it just feels a little off. And I agree with the "Tide of jaws" comments, it's just a little strange.

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Prey - by Pyxx - 09-13-2014, 09:31 AM

RE: The Tide - by ajcohen613 - 09-13-2014, 11:12 AM

RE: The Tide - by Erthona - 09-13-2014, 11:14 AM

RE: The Tide - by zahrakh - 09-13-2014, 04:34 PM

RE: The Tide - by Mwaba don - 09-20-2014, 08:27 PM

RE: The Tide - by BenjaminShaw - 09-29-2014, 07:26 PM

RE: The Tide - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-10-2014, 06:05 AM

RE: The Tide - by Word Weaver - 10-10-2014, 03:43 PM

RE: The Tide - by Brownlie - 10-10-2014, 03:57 PM

RE: The Tide - by Owl - 10-11-2014, 11:38 AM

RE: The Tide - by crow - 10-11-2014, 11:10 PM

RE: The Tide - by crow - 10-11-2014, 11:57 PM

RE: The Tide - by crow - 10-12-2014, 02:03 AM

RE: The Tide - by Owl - 10-12-2014, 03:23 PM

RE: The Tide - by Pyxx - 11-06-2014, 02:28 AM

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