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A Storm is COming
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10-10-2014, 06:01 AM
I really like the first stanza in particular. The use of questions was an interesting element that added a certain level of uniqueness to the poem. My only suggestion would be to add more figurative language towards the end of the poem. It starts to drop off a little, and I think you could add more to it.
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A Storm is COming - by 2fargone - 09-25-2014, 09:41 PM
RE: A Storm is COming - by billy - 09-25-2014, 10:47 PM
RE: A Storm is COming - by Todd - 09-26-2014, 12:24 AM
RE: A Storm is COming - by StanleyZ - 09-26-2014, 10:08 AM
RE: A Storm is COming - by simmon - 09-26-2014, 12:21 PM
RE: A Storm is COming - by Starbeam - 09-26-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: A Storm is COming - by 2fargone - 09-28-2014, 12:29 AM
RE: A Storm is COming - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-10-2014, 06:01 AM
RE: A Storm is COming - by Hermit - 10-23-2014, 09:06 AM
RE: A Storm is COming - by lateralus - 10-25-2014, 06:48 AM
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