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10-09-2014, 01:40 AM

i like the poem, though the first two words [wind whispers] makes it seem like the the wind is asking to be chased, yet i want to see the leaves being chased by the wind

(10-06-2014, 12:38 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: wind whispers to burnt leaves,
" I'm incredible,
you oughta be chasing me".

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5-10 - by Tiger the Lion - 10-06-2014, 12:38 PM

RE: 5-10 - by just mercedes - 10-07-2014, 05:11 AM

RE: 5-10 - by b.abraham - 10-07-2014, 07:31 AM

RE: 5-10 - by Erthona - 10-07-2014, 08:12 AM

RE: 5-10 - by Tiger the Lion - 10-07-2014, 08:22 AM

RE: 5-10 - by Erthona - 10-07-2014, 08:37 AM

RE: 5-10 - by Tiger the Lion - 10-07-2014, 09:55 AM

RE: 5-10 - by cjchaffin - 10-07-2014, 01:23 PM

RE: 5-10 - by Muggler - 10-09-2014, 01:25 AM

RE: 5-10 - by billy - 10-09-2014, 01:40 AM

RE: 5-10 - by Tiger the Lion - 10-09-2014, 07:37 AM

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