There's No Reason To Be Nice And Good

[cidermaid]

Hi rowens,   I found a lot to like in this one.  Sort of distracted honesty.
Left a clue of comments for your consideration.

                     There's No Reason To Be Nice And Good
                                                                     for Sarah Ewald

I'm bad
because the orgasm of the world is death,  not sure why this make one bad but I don't care I love your opening three line.
and I want to be good.

No vicious envy curtails my pride,
I don't use faggoty words like 'curtail';
only a master reader could be as slavish as that.
What was that someone said about indifference to your hearers.    Would it be better than that in this line.  It reads odd as it is.

No, 
I don't even ask a question
but tell you of, in one off effort:   this line cause my to stumble on each read through

the secret of the curling hair,
the softness of persistent stress. Love this side angle and distraction

They don't make too many good things anymore,
it's so easy and so much better to be bad,
they make just enough.

Left me with more questions than answers but some how it works for me.   (But the title not so much...suggest just nice and to get the good...it is vastly overrated anyway)

AJ