10-08-2014, 04:46 AM
(09-27-2014, 12:41 PM)Trixareforkids Wrote:(08-15-2014, 11:08 AM)Wjames Wrote: Mariah dreamt of wedding bells
after her pet frog died,
she ate the legs and stomped a toad
still wasn’t satisfied.
Cathy wouldn’t crush a bug
she loved to bleed a feast,
her itch to give became so strong
she raped her virgin priest.
Suzie never cared to think
about dead frogs or bugs,
we’d eat ourselves before too long
so why pretend to love?(08-16-2014, 02:26 PM)Wjames Wrote: Thanks the responses guys. I think S1 is sort of obtusely worded, but I like it anyways. It doesn't really "make sense", but it does the job.S1 was my favorite part of the piece. To me it says frog prince be damned, no more kissing toads for that girl. Made me laugh.
Thanks, glad you got something from it.