Pollen - haiku??
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(10-06-2014, 07:48 PM)tomoffing Wrote:  Powerful sneeze-
wind stirred seeds
lift tissue sales.
any guidance appreciated, i'm bran new to anything short form.
Something about this I like, though rhyme isn't used much in haiku. Also - pollen is not seeds. Maybe something like this ~

powerful sneeze
wind-stirred dust
tissue sales lift
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Pollen - haiku?? - by tomoffing - 10-06-2014, 07:48 PM
RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by ChristopherSea - 10-06-2014, 08:10 PM
RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by billy - 10-06-2014, 11:17 PM
RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by Tamara - 10-07-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by Tiger the Lion - 10-07-2014, 08:32 AM
RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by just mercedes - 10-07-2014, 08:46 AM



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