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Pollen - haiku??

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10-07-2014, 12:33 AM

(10-06-2014, 07:48 PM)tomoffing Wrote: Powerful sneeze-
wind stirred seeds
lift tissue sales.

any guidance appreciated, i'm bran new to anything short form.

reads well to me though i am against using upper case in haiku/senryu.

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Pollen - haiku?? - by tomoffing - 10-06-2014, 07:48 PM

RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by ChristopherSea - 10-06-2014, 08:10 PM

RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by billy - 10-06-2014, 11:17 PM

RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by Tamara - 10-07-2014, 12:33 AM

RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by Tiger the Lion - 10-07-2014, 08:32 AM

RE: Pollen - haiku?? - by just mercedes - 10-07-2014, 08:46 AM

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