one line haiku

[rayheinrich]

thank you, ray.

I'm on my fifth interpretation; it seems like every word is a cutting word.
Wonderful.

Ray



P.S. One-line haiku?  
I forgot who said this: "In fucking Japanese it's one line."

Know of Marlene Mountain? She specializes in one-line-haiku.
A few of hers:

new year's same old rotten world beautiful earth

surrounded by non-kigo nature ah

intellectuals do 'genesis' a jaw bone between lucy & us from mars

picture-perfect nature

i've come to the fir and learned of acid clouds

She does visual haiku as well.

Marlene Mountain