Colors of Emotion

[Tamara]

I wrote this today, I'm not a good writer and I know it. I've rarely written anything, and nothing that I have ever in my life felt this connected to.


Blue and red swim together.  (does each sentence have to end with a period? You can have the first three lines without the period.)
Like the mouth of a river, and ocean.  
They will be together, always and forever. (i think you just need forever)
Mixing and churning, like a sweet potion.  

Every time I look upon it, my emotions become a raging sea. (look at them and again no need to end each line with a period )
Where I once thought I fit, now doesn't seem so free.  
This feeling I get is new and real.
Time wins this bet. (i don't think this line is required)
My walls, they seem to peel.

Welcome to the site. For someone who has rarely written anything, this is a good write. The colors and emotions seem to whirl and blend together .