a haiku

a haiku

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10-01-2014, 12:46 AM

(09-30-2014, 11:41 PM)billy Wrote: not sure the cut is good enough as a counter part,

(09-30-2014, 12:14 PM)cjchaffin Wrote: sundown -
moonflowers
climb my trellis
a suggestion to make a more defined tack eksewhere;

sundown

moon flowers climb my trellis-
the gutter needs cleaning

ha! point taken...i shall think on this. thanks billy.

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a haiku - by cjchaffin - 09-30-2014, 12:14 PM

RE: a haiku - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 10:52 PM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-01-2014, 12:46 AM

RE: a haiku - by billy - 09-30-2014, 11:41 PM

RE: a haiku - by ChristopherSea - 09-30-2014, 11:43 PM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-01-2014, 12:46 AM

RE: a haiku - by rayheinrich - 11-08-2014, 05:24 PM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 11-09-2014, 03:06 AM

RE: a haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 07:14 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 11-09-2014, 03:05 AM

RE: a haiku - by rayheinrich - 11-09-2014, 10:17 AM

RE: a haiku - by just mercedes - 11-09-2014, 04:25 AM

RE: a haiku - by billy - 11-09-2014, 04:42 PM

RE: a haiku - by bena - 11-10-2014, 11:58 PM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 11-11-2014, 04:43 AM

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