9.30.14 NY
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Maybe you could combine the last lines in some way if you don't like them.



Buildings tip over, an enclosure of embers.

Meaning doesn't mean much anymore, now we're more about schizophrenic associations.
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9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 10:30 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 11:10 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by billy - 09-30-2014, 11:37 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 11:38 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ChristopherSea - 09-30-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Erthona - 10-01-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by justcloudy - 10-01-2014, 03:34 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 03:42 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:03 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 04:06 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 04:21 AM
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