9.30.14 NY
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the date is an automatic 9/11 switch for me as is the whirlwind memory line. so i get something from the poem.
it feels very metaphorical but i'm presuming it's an actual image. not keen on souls rising as there really isn't a clear enough reference for such.

(09-30-2014, 10:21 PM)ellajam Wrote:  dark clouds on building tips
overlay clear skies
September
whirlwind memory
souls rising
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9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 10:30 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 11:10 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by billy - 09-30-2014, 11:37 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 11:38 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ChristopherSea - 09-30-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Erthona - 10-01-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by justcloudy - 10-01-2014, 03:34 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 03:42 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:03 AM
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RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 04:21 AM
RE: 9.30.14 NY - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 01:32 PM



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