9.30.14 NY

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The terrorist attacks did for D.H. Lawrence's birthday what Elvis Presley's death did for Groucho Marx' death.


Is buildings tips over- supposed to be some mean play on words?

The clouds this morning looked like the buildings where smoking, unusual formation. Yes, it's a mean world sometimes.

dark clouds on building tips (building tips, I keep reading it as building tops, but clouds on building tips give it a sort of image of balancing something )
overlay clear skies ( together with the first line, it gives  a good picture)
September
whirlwind memory
souls rising

The last three lines don't tie in nicely for me. I like the image but it is kind of choppy. It reads as three different images.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Tamara. I'll try to think of some way to make the bottom work. I appreciate your input.