9.30.14 NY

[Tamara]

dark clouds on building tips (building tips, I keep reading it as building tops, but clouds on building tips give it a sort of image of balancing something )
overlay clear skies ( together with the first line, it gives  a good picture)
September
whirlwind memory
souls rising

The last three lines don't tie in nicely for me. I like the image but it is kind of choppy. It reads as three different images.