I Do

[vrryan]

Hello, I really like the story behide it, but I think the rythme can be improve a little more. "I think of you in every song" is a bit too much for me given that the person is quite a dreamer. Well... just my opinion anyway. ^ ^"

Hey, thanks. My friend asked me if I could make a poem for her but not that I'm really good at making poems. She has a crush on someone, who doesn't even know she existed. She told me that she is thinking about her crush in every song she is hearing, and she has in mind that she saw her crush on a specific place but she doesn't even know if it was really him. She was hoping that it was her crush. Thanks btw.