I Do
#5
Hello, I really like the story behide it, but I think the rythme can be improve a little more. "I think of you in every song" is a bit too much for me given that the person is quite a dreamer. Well... just my opinion anyway. ^ ^"
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I Do - by vrryan - 09-28-2014, 09:46 AM
RE: I Do - by Erthona - 09-28-2014, 11:39 AM
RE: I Do - by vrryan - 09-28-2014, 11:57 AM
RE: I Do - by billy - 09-28-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: I Do - by simmon - 09-29-2014, 04:07 PM
RE: I Do - by vrryan - 09-29-2014, 08:40 PM



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