haiku/senryu

haiku/senryu

Tamara Offline

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09-28-2014, 03:08 AM

i guess i need to remove the 'my' from the last two. do they read okay now?

aquamarine
sea in
the palm
*********
blue
the green in
turquoise ring

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haiku/senryu - by Tamara - 09-27-2014, 02:18 PM

RE: haiku/senryu - by Tamara - 09-27-2014, 10:18 PM

RE: haiku/senryu - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 03:08 AM

RE: haiku/senryu - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 11:52 AM

RE: haiku/senryu - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 01:44 AM

RE: haiku/senryu - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 02:12 AM

RE: haiku/senryu - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 02:25 AM

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