09-26-2014, 03:41 PM
(09-24-2014, 08:23 PM)brandontoh Wrote: Grandeur
Let the books fall
like whale carcasses do they flop?
flopping onto the filthy you got a bit carried away with 'f' sounds
dusty floor.
Let narration from YouTube videos fill
up the spaces with white noise, maybe a particular vid would work better than the general
as words diffuse from a British lady I wonder why she is British?
into senseless garbles. interesting new noun
Let shadows of thoughts drown,
bubble, and sink;
because in this place,
even gods can die. good strong ending, though I'm not sure of what.
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Hi - I'm intrigued to discover why this protagonist is despairing about knowledge. A room full of books made me think library or office, and the feeling is of loss of faith in learning. If even gods can die, what chance does a mortal have? Very existentialist, that loss of will.
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