Grandeur
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(09-24-2014, 08:23 PM)brandontoh Wrote:  Grandeur

Let the books fall
like whale carcasses do they flop?
flopping onto the filthy you got a bit carried away with 'f' sounds
dusty floor.

Let narration from YouTube videos fill
up the spaces with white noise, maybe a particular vid would work better than the general
as words diffuse from a British lady I wonder why she is British?
into senseless garbles. interesting new noun

Let shadows of thoughts drown,
bubble, and sink;
because in this place,
even gods can die. good strong ending, though I'm not sure of what.


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Hi - I'm intrigued to discover why this protagonist is despairing about knowledge. A room full of books made me think library or office, and the feeling is of loss of faith in learning. If even gods can die, what chance does a mortal have? Very existentialist, that loss of will.

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Messages In This Thread
Grandeur - by brandontoh - 09-24-2014, 08:23 PM
RE: Grandeur - by tectak - 09-24-2014, 09:02 PM
RE: Grandeur - by billy - 09-25-2014, 01:52 AM
RE: Grandeur - by brandontoh - 09-25-2014, 05:52 PM
RE: Grandeur - by billy - 09-25-2014, 06:06 PM
RE: Grandeur - by just mercedes - 09-26-2014, 03:41 PM
RE: Grandeur - by brandontoh - 09-27-2014, 12:50 AM



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