09-26-2014, 02:19 AM
"is the 'she' in the song the pony? the meter doesn't sound bad, though i know meter isn't the same with lyrics.
in some places it rhymes in others it don't is that a good or bad thing with lyrics? in general it reads okay and the love of a horse will always be country and western to me, so that's how i see it. i'm crap wit lyrics so it's all i have to offer"
billy,
I'm learning, too. See if this seems right. The problem with the above is in the flags. It's flagged w a verse, a chorus, and a bridge, but in reality, it's all verses. This is a through-composed piece, and so the flags should be [Verse 1], [Verse 2], [Verse 3].
The note should be this: "crow, either make a legit chorus and a true bridge, or label as through-composed."
I'll rewrite it so that it has a true chorus and a proper bridge:
in some places it rhymes in others it don't is that a good or bad thing with lyrics? in general it reads okay and the love of a horse will always be country and western to me, so that's how i see it. i'm crap wit lyrics so it's all i have to offer"
billy,
I'm learning, too. See if this seems right. The problem with the above is in the flags. It's flagged w a verse, a chorus, and a bridge, but in reality, it's all verses. This is a through-composed piece, and so the flags should be [Verse 1], [Verse 2], [Verse 3].
The note should be this: "crow, either make a legit chorus and a true bridge, or label as through-composed."
I'll rewrite it so that it has a true chorus and a proper bridge:
A yak is normal.