09-25-2014, 05:52 PM
Thanks tectak, thanks billy! The original title of the poem was 'Feverish Daydream', does that help provide more context?
tectak: It always amazes me the little details that you manage to catch in a poem that I couldn't even after reading it many times. One day, I'll critique your poems. The unique syntax that you have makes me a little apprehensive, but I'll try, sooner or later.
tectak: It always amazes me the little details that you manage to catch in a poem that I couldn't even after reading it many times. One day, I'll critique your poems. The unique syntax that you have makes me a little apprehensive, but I'll try, sooner or later.
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