09-19-2014, 12:40 PM
I see you again, my precious child.
In the sharp cold winter breath, you wilted.
Is this a millionth time you been stepped on?
Yet you never fail to cover me in green.
Many souls out there never notice how great you are,
but you never care, keep grow up tall and strong.
Many souls out there claim that they are proud,
but fail to stand up when they have fallen.
Sunk in their despair and forget
about those who still care for them.
Another newbie's work... still on practice.
***Thank you cidermaid and billy. Sorry for being so late to respond, but I do really appreciate your comment since there are still a lot for me to learn. I will see if i can make this one better, but it going to take some time because I need to do more reading to improve my skill.
In the sharp cold winter breath, you wilted.
Is this a millionth time you been stepped on?
Yet you never fail to cover me in green.
Many souls out there never notice how great you are,
but you never care, keep grow up tall and strong.
Many souls out there claim that they are proud,
but fail to stand up when they have fallen.
Sunk in their despair and forget
about those who still care for them.
Another newbie's work... still on practice.
***Thank you cidermaid and billy. Sorry for being so late to respond, but I do really appreciate your comment since there are still a lot for me to learn. I will see if i can make this one better, but it going to take some time because I need to do more reading to improve my skill.