'ku 9-14 edit

'ku 9-14 edit

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09-19-2014, 09:24 AM

(09-15-2014, 12:37 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Can't seem to take the scissors to this any further. Hmmm

always autumn
she falls asleep
praying

maybe do away with 'always'

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'ku 9-14 edit - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 12:37 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by rayheinrich - 09-15-2014, 03:19 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by billy - 09-15-2014, 06:25 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 07:48 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by rayheinrich - 09-16-2014, 03:05 AM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by Tamara - 09-19-2014, 09:24 AM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by bena - 10-17-2014, 09:28 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by billy - 10-17-2014, 09:33 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by bena - 10-17-2014, 10:39 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by rayheinrich - 10-18-2014, 04:02 AM

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