09-13-2014, 11:14 AM
Pyxx,
Nice images, and it rolls along pretty good. I'm sure it must be a metaphor, but what it refers to I haven't a clue.Some of this seems out of sync with time, "The wolves they crawl within" is before "the pack closes in." So that is somewhat puzzling. I'm not asking for an explanation, you should never explain your work. But perhaps add a little more context so the reader might have a chance to divine what your on about.
Dale
Nice images, and it rolls along pretty good. I'm sure it must be a metaphor, but what it refers to I haven't a clue.Some of this seems out of sync with time, "The wolves they crawl within" is before "the pack closes in." So that is somewhat puzzling. I'm not asking for an explanation, you should never explain your work. But perhaps add a little more context so the reader might have a chance to divine what your on about.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.