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First Time Sharing
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09-11-2014, 11:05 AM
(09-11-2014, 07:21 AM)rowens Wrote: I like the thick muscularity of it. Do you feel unhappy with any parts of it, or you just don't know?What do you mean when you say "thick muscularity"? Also, there are parts I'd like to work on....especially the first 5 lines. I thought of them last so I feel like they sound like add-ons. |
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First Time Sharing - by LadyDay - 09-10-2014, 10:33 AM
RE: First Time Sharing - by rowens - 09-11-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: First Time Sharing - by LadyDay - 09-11-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: First Time Sharing - by rowens - 09-11-2014, 09:43 PM
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