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To: All the Girls
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09-11-2014, 06:35 AM
I love poems that rhyme but could you separate the poem with a space according to the style. That is, if it is a quatrain or something like that. I think poems read better when the spacing is shown than reading the whole lot straight. Also, i didn't see the use of the semi colonies. Nice poem overall.
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RE: To: All the Girls - by CameranMorgan - 09-04-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 06:35 AM
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