09-10-2014, 10:05 AM
First line should either say texted or text said. Overall it's a bit wordy and it took a conscious effort to realize that it rhymed, good effort though
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Great expectations
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Great expectations - by Keith - 03-18-2014, 08:25 AM
RE: Great expectations - by faithlovedance22 - 09-10-2014, 10:05 AM
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RE: Great expectations - by billy - 09-13-2014, 07:26 PM
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