Phrases to forever expunge from your critiques
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(09-06-2014, 08:47 AM)Erthona Wrote:  It made my hearty sore...er soar.

One of the best I've read.

It has a soft meaning.

It's depth invigorates me.

It makes me thrill.

I know it must be from your heart as it touches me so much.

dale
Are you sure this wasn't posted to an erotica workshop?
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Phrases to forever expunge from your critiques - by Todd - 09-06-2014, 12:59 PM



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