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[danny_]

thanks for taking a moment, Brownlie. i tend to be a little technical in my writing style sometimes. still learning to put the flow into it without going into overflow.

There are all sorts of conventions in poetry that I am unfamiliar with, but much of the language here seems to omit language that would give the text cohesion. For instance, Raindrop sounds choppy the way it's written. Just a quick note. Thanks for posting.