09-05-2014, 07:07 PM
Hi, JC, welcome back. 
Late to the comment but I've been enjoying this. Good work on the edit, thoughtful breaks. My only suggestion is the possibility of paste instead of glue, it brings me back to the pigtails.
Thanks for the interesting read.
Late to the comment but I've been enjoying this. Good work on the edit, thoughtful breaks. My only suggestion is the possibility of paste instead of glue, it brings me back to the pigtails.Thanks for the interesting read.
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