09-04-2014, 07:50 PM
(06-06-2014, 05:49 PM)kmatrixg Wrote: Almost comes off as prose and not poetry. Needs a solid rhyme scheme, also. Imagery is great, and so are the descriptors.
(09-04-2014, 12:22 PM)CameranMorgan Wrote: Yeah I agree with a lot of people. It's rough. Maybe next time look up some tactics to help guide you. Best of luck!Neither of these are valid critique and are being deleted. Please try to emulate the best crit on a thread, not the worst. It would sincerely be appreciated.
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