09-04-2014, 12:44 PM
His lips upon mine,
Like a hot summer night,
Making love
In the pale moonlight,
His eyes staring into mine,
As the stars shine bright
Reflecting in our eyes,
He had asked for one last dance
Before the night came to an end,
Ending up
In the truck bed,
With kisses sending sparks
Flashing across our little sky,
Making two star crossed lovers
Falling in love
In the dead of the night...
Modern Romeo and Juliet
-CM-
It needs work so any advice would be awesome!
Like a hot summer night,
Making love
In the pale moonlight,
His eyes staring into mine,
As the stars shine bright
Reflecting in our eyes,
He had asked for one last dance
Before the night came to an end,
Ending up
In the truck bed,
With kisses sending sparks
Flashing across our little sky,
Making two star crossed lovers
Falling in love
In the dead of the night...
Modern Romeo and Juliet
-CM-
It needs work so any advice would be awesome!