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First Haiku
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09-04-2014, 05:20 AM
i'd forgotten about this kind of writing. went back and read again more patiently. i do agree the question doesn't matter. poetry like this doesn't flash the way it should when you're on a coffee crash. your first revision works for me, perfectly well. but i do like the shorter suggested versions too. up to your style i guess
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First Haiku - by alatos - 08-31-2014, 10:50 PM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 11:53 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Tamara - 09-02-2014, 12:34 PM
RE: First Haiku - by billy - 09-02-2014, 10:50 PM
RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 01:35 AM
RE: First Haiku - by alatos - 09-03-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 09:10 AM
RE: First Haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: First Haiku - by ThisGuy1 - 09-03-2014, 11:27 PM
RE: First Haiku - by tectak - 09-04-2014, 08:41 AM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 05:20 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Gaslampfantasy - 09-04-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 10:39 PM
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