Right Now I'm Wondering...
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"Right now I’m wondering, where are you now?
Are we in the same country, or does fate not allow?
Are we thousands of miles apart, or just round the corner?
All I’m sure of at this time, is that love has no border.
What are you doing now? Are you asleep or awake
The more I think about you, the more my heart begins to ache.
Is your mind free like a bird, with wind gushing through your wings I don't like wind 'gushing'. Gushing seems like something liquids do, not air
Or are you sat alone just like me, pondering the same things?
Do we have common interests? How about pastimes
Your enjoyment and happiness, will translate into mine. Is enjoyment even a word? Idk, it sounds weird, and kind of redundant with 'happiness' right after
Are we two peas in a pod, or just like white and black [b]'peas in a pod' just seems way too cliché.
Because I’ve heard once or twice, that opposites attract.
I’m putting together who you are, but I’m missing a few pieces
Name, face, where you live, and especially your best features.

Right now I’m wondering, when will we ever meet?
Are you a good friend of mine, or a stranger from the street?"

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It seems like it's supposed to be a sonnet. I'm kinda confused...
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
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Messages In This Thread
Right Now I'm Wondering... - by Smudge173 - 08-04-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by SomeRandom - 08-04-2014, 02:05 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by Smudge173 - 08-05-2014, 03:15 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by Bunx - 08-07-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by bena - 08-11-2014, 05:19 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by billy - 08-11-2014, 06:39 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by bena - 08-11-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by billy - 08-11-2014, 11:07 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by bena - 08-12-2014, 01:51 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by alatos - 08-12-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by Random Phoenix - 08-15-2014, 09:28 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by UberWilhelm - 08-19-2014, 10:35 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by VisualPoet703 - 09-01-2014, 06:29 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by zahrakh - 09-01-2014, 11:40 PM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by ThePinsir - 09-03-2014, 12:54 AM
RE: Right Now I'm Wondering... - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 07:44 AM



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