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[justcloudy]

Thanks Danny. I often think what I'm writing is clear, but then other readers like you bring me back to reality and remind me the rest of you aren't also in my head. I'll take your comments into consideration, thanks for taking the time.

Heslopian, I appreciate your take-- you made me see some things I hadn't before, and I love a new perspective. Will keep your read in mind for an edit. Thanks much.

-justcloudy