09-02-2014, 08:43 AM
(09-02-2014, 08:31 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Hey Keith. Just rereading this. Edit looks good. Just one thought...Thanks for the nit Paul, I have made a quick change, it has to be Speedos so thank you. Best Keith
I’m really skinny but I've got big hips
and it’s hard to find Speedo’s that fit,
and it's hard to find a Speedo that fits -- I think perfects the rhyme better without disturbing the rhythm. Otherwise, I think it should be "Speedos", not possessive.
Enjoyable read. Thanks.
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