09-02-2014, 08:31 AM
Hey Keith. Just rereading this. Edit looks good. Just one thought...
I’m really skinny but I've got big hips
and it’s hard to find Speedo’s that fit,
and it's hard to find a Speedo that fits -- I think perfects the rhyme better without disturbing the rhythm. Otherwise, I think it should be "Speedos", not possessive.
Enjoyable read. Thanks.
I’m really skinny but I've got big hips
and it’s hard to find Speedo’s that fit,
and it's hard to find a Speedo that fits -- I think perfects the rhyme better without disturbing the rhythm. Otherwise, I think it should be "Speedos", not possessive.
Enjoyable read. Thanks.