Harbor Morning
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(09-02-2014, 06:17 AM)danny_ Wrote:  is short form free verse ok in here?

Harbor Morning
Rocking of boats.
Gray light awakens,
slow as the snail
crossing the planks.

I like the way focus moves in your short poem - from boats out into the sky, then back into the close-up of slug.
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Harbor Morning - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 06:17 AM
RE: Harbor Morning - by just mercedes - 09-02-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: Harbor Morning - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 08:01 AM



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