First Haiku

First Haiku

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08-31-2014, 10:50 PM

Edit 1:

We stand in the door.
With snow falling, I ask you...
two moonlit smiles.

Original:

We stood in the door.
With snow falling, I asked you...
two moonlit smiles.

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First Haiku - by alatos - 08-31-2014, 10:50 PM

RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 11:53 AM

RE: First Haiku - by Tamara - 09-02-2014, 12:34 PM

RE: First Haiku - by billy - 09-02-2014, 10:50 PM

RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 01:35 AM

RE: First Haiku - by alatos - 09-03-2014, 08:30 AM

RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 09:10 AM

RE: First Haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2014, 08:38 AM

RE: First Haiku - by ThisGuy1 - 09-03-2014, 11:27 PM

RE: First Haiku - by tectak - 09-04-2014, 08:41 AM

RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 05:20 AM

RE: First Haiku - by Gaslampfantasy - 09-04-2014, 09:52 PM

RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 10:39 PM

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