08-29-2014, 12:44 AM
(08-29-2014, 12:24 AM)entwife Wrote: well done, the mood and the meter keep pace with each other. but ouch, me and my old guy sometimes have to "stay in bed til noon".
We rise early no matter what.I poked around a bit, seems til is wrong, 'til is used enough to be accepted but still wrong, till is correct. Changed, thanks.
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