Inside the mind of a puppy (My first poem)

[billy]

Howdy and thanks for taking the time to read it and write some advice. Punctuation is something I have to admit I have a hard time with when it comes to poems. For some reason I just can't seem to pick up on where it should go. I find it extremely hard to write something that doesn't include a cliche simply because it feel like everything has been used before. LOL I appreciate the advice and I will try to heed it in the future. I do have a handful of other poems that I will post (one at a time of course) so I hope they get better. Thanks again.

all we ask is that you're as dilligent with feedback

you're a good example of how to accept feedback