08-22-2014, 11:50 PM
(08-22-2014, 11:39 PM)billy Wrote: god i feel oldYou're right on conveniently, I don't know what I did when I put it together, but that line's screwed now. I'll look through the scraps of paper I pulled out of my bag and fix it. And I often screw the couplet, I think of that first then tend to just let it be,great effort ella. i got stuck a little with conveniently though the half rhyme (almost) does work well in the couplet.
Thanks for the read. Life would suck without the laughter.
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