08-18-2014, 08:43 AM
I'm a fan of figurative poetry and this is a great attempt. Although other users have said otherwise I enjoyed the vagueness of some lines as it allowed you to make of it as you wish. Overall the feel I got from reading thus that you wished to covey the intangible elements of being human. Such as love, friendship and anger. The sense of religion you create also came to mind.

