a haiku

a haiku

Keith

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#10

08-13-2014, 06:51 AM

A new word for me "sated" so thanks for that, and it makes the last line, I agree with others that L1 could do more but no the less a very nice Haiku. Best Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

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a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-12-2014, 08:36 AM

RE: a haiku - by Leanne - 08-12-2014, 08:45 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-12-2014, 08:48 AM

RE: a haiku - by Leanne - 08-12-2014, 08:50 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-12-2014, 08:56 AM

RE: a haiku - by ellajam - 08-12-2014, 08:54 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-13-2014, 12:55 AM

RE: a haiku - by John Galt - 08-13-2014, 04:59 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-13-2014, 06:05 AM

RE: a haiku - by Keith - 08-13-2014, 06:51 AM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-13-2014, 12:31 PM

RE: a haiku - by newsclippings - 08-13-2014, 12:34 PM

RE: a haiku - by cjchaffin - 08-13-2014, 12:39 PM

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