Ins and Outs of Dead Men on the Rivers of Isis (milo, billy)

[milo]

Milo, the idea Orpheus being ripped apart into many pieces shows and interesting take that seems to be in conversation, probably via Isis, with the mythos surrounding Osiris. That my little vill seems to have joined that conversation doesn't bother me at all. I very much appreciate you taking the discussion of the poem to that level.

Speaking of intent--and there are a lot of parallels and conflation here--I wonder what you would think of these lines, which I had also been considering for the recently revised tercet:


We carve our caskets tall and wide
then sniff complaints of rotting wood.

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Your link is broken.

I think that the only thing it adds is caskets which isn't really revelatory or revolutionary here.

As for the link, it was posted by the author who is, unfortunately, dead now so all his links are dying as well it seems.

It is very unfortunate. I have the sonnets milo, if you are missing them.

I am actually. Which do you have, just the singing head ones or all of them?