Isabelle edit0.01 ella, billy

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L6 an ice-melt.

This one has blown me away, it evokes those days when we value every word, spoken or not, each moment shared precious in whatever capacity we can carry it off.

The narrator being the visitor but the one missing words at the end was a beautiful turn. The rhyme is something for me to aspire to, I only saw them when I looked for them.

For me this is a real standout. L2 keeps seeming long to me, but it's only been a few reads. Thanks for posting this. A heartbreaking pleasure.

Hi ella,
not like me to miss an easy alliteration....than an Thanks.

Yes....two old lovers in a nursing home. She with advanced Altz and he with senile dem....very poignant. I saw it. Thanks for comments.
Best,
Tom