The Rut

[Tiger the Lion]

Thanks everyone for your input. I always knew the "October" line wouldn't work twice- it wasn't really meant as a refrain - I just wasn't sure which to keep. I was leaning toward ditching the first instance, but now I wonder if both are somehow misplaced. Funny, but I wanted there to be a lot of "clashing". I think I used it 3 times in the first write. Editing this piecemeal right now. Might have something soon. Thanks.