Could I Die Alone?
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I agree with the others but I LOVE the line "scared for the children who felt for the villain" now THAT could be an awesome poem. Keep writing!
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Could I Die Alone? - by Pink_Bunny - 08-02-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Could I Die Alone? - by newsclippings - 08-02-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: Could I Die Alone? - by QDeathstar - 08-02-2014, 01:08 PM
RE: Could I Die Alone? - by dwestmor - 08-02-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: Could I Die Alone? - by Erthona - 08-03-2014, 12:04 AM
RE: Could I Die Alone? - by trueenigma - 08-03-2014, 01:37 AM



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