How bright the flame
#4
I misread the title. I thought it said "how to bright the flame" and I thought, man now that's an interesting concept.

Try to write that poem for me. Think of it as a personal challenge, because I am curious to see what you come up with.

This piece is pretty mundane. I think s4 could be in a 70s love song. Same old story, really weak ending since you've used consume twice.

Yes, we are all old fuddy-duddies (now that's a funny word)
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Messages In This Thread
How bright the flame - by dwestmor - 08-01-2014, 04:04 PM
RE: How bright the flame - by John Galt - 08-02-2014, 04:51 AM
RE: How bright the flame - by newsclippings - 08-02-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: How bright the flame - by bena - 08-02-2014, 11:44 AM
RE: How bright the flame - by billy - 08-02-2014, 04:26 PM
RE: How bright the flame - by tectak - 08-02-2014, 04:51 PM
RE: How bright the flame - by Erthona - 08-02-2014, 06:10 PM



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